“唔、唔嗯……明智先生……”
在稍稍显得有些心酸的哭了一会后,趴在小兰身上的园子,正一脸委屈的看向高远,脸上倒也没有真的流露出多少眼泪,只是似乎对于高远这么直白的说辞感到大受打击——
“至少……可、可以告诉我是哪里无趣,让我当作参考吗?”
“嗯……”
看着如此坚持的园子,似乎对于这个话剧的剧本的执着是认真的,高远稍稍组织了一下语言,大概说道:
“简单来说,就是普通。开篇发生事件,警察到达现场进行调查,然后发现现场留下的线索,并找到指名凶手的证据……这样的叙事,作为一篇短小故事来说实在过于普通……”
如此说着,高远话语稍稍停顿了一下,略显无奈的说道:
“当然,故事短小、剧情普通,这对于推理来说并不是主要的问题,因为推理的乐趣在于最后的解谜,只要最后的解谜足够有趣、足够精彩,那么这就是一篇优秀的作品了。但是,作为话剧……”
说到这,高远不免看向了身侧的小哀,很是认同小哀刚才的说法的,继续说道:
“小哀刚才说的很对,开篇直接就是冗长的调查跟询问情节,要是就这样演出来,对于平时不看类似作品的观众来说,就实在太过于折磨了。这不像是推理是有着专门的受众的,慈善话剧终究是要面向到时来观看的各种群体的……”
“唔、唔……那、那……”
听到高远这么说,园子肩膀不断的抖动着,似乎鼓起勇气想要反驳,但话到嘴边又不知道该说些什么——
“所以,与其写这种推理故事的剧本,我觉得不如还是写一些老少皆宜的故事吧!像是童话啊、喜剧什么的,都是不错的选择!”
最终,高远如此建议道。
而对于这样的建议,小哀,还有柯南两人,都默默的点了点头,感觉十分合理。
“可……可是……”
但园子,似乎仍旧不死心的,有些委屈的说道:
“我就是想写这样的剧本嘛!像童话故事什么的,那未免也太普通了!”
有些无理取闹的,靠在小兰身上的园子坐起了身,撒娇似得发起了牢骚,这看的一旁的高远、小哀、柯南等人一脸无奈——
“对啊对啊!”
但是,对于园子的说法,光彦却出声支持道:
“那种一点都不真实的童话故事,演起来一点劲都没有!而且,我觉得园子姐姐写的剧本,真的还蛮真实的哎!”
“对吧对吧!”
听到有人支持自己的想法,园子顿时来了精神,刚才的悲伤感一下子就被她甩到脑后,认真的说道:
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